A Rose | Teen Ink

A Rose

March 16, 2015
By USIN0325 BRONZE, Mumbai, Other
USIN0325 BRONZE, Mumbai, Other
3 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't ever let someone decide whether you are relevant or not.


The water shimmered
Blue and gold
The breeze and the mist
one shallow rose

It sat by the water
It’s leaves dipped in
Awaiting the time
it would bloom again

Time went on
the sun set beneath the hills
one could hear the sighs
and the waiting in will

The rose then shriveled
Beneath a pile of dirt
covered and tortured
stressed and hurt

The rose it swore
to see the light of day
when would it breathe? 
only time would say

But time didn’t say
and that broke the deal
between the moon and the sun
and the little rose’s will

The rose it cried
cried in the storm
as the terror whipped
and smiled in scorn

 

As the wind died down 

Not a soul in sight 

one couldn't hear

the little rose's plight 

 

This life, I tell you
of the rose, I say
it never even saw
the light of day.


The author's comments:

This piece is about the awaiting of love, and when it doesn't arrive, you think about the things you could have done differently to make it come, but by that time, it would be too late. It portrays the stress and the drama that comes with the awful suspense. 


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 1 comment.


Anonymous said...
on Mar. 18 2015 at 12:03 pm
You're work is truly amazing and you have a gift for writing! This poem is so beautiful and I can relate to it so much!!!