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Rain Stop Studderin'

I'd rather feel the wind of a thousand hurricanes
To get in the middle of an ice cold snowflake
Of please stop playing all these sad games,
Nature is becoming my worst pain
You love barging in on our parade
All of this sin is in the way
So rain stop studderin'.
Show us the light-take the rain to just a whimper
Open the gates in the mist of summer
Delay all the storms for my non-white winter,
Tears from God what are you trying to say
These waterfalls must someday go away
Why water do you always wanna prey
Come on rain stop studderin'.
Feel the burn of a raging forest-fire
I no longer need good nature's pop up shower
Reveal your music in the brown autum thereafter,
No matter how much I want you gone
We know you never did me wrong
So please trust me, all always stay
Rain talk to me in May. ~



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KylineFThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 10 at 10:38 pm:
I hate rain, but loved your poem.
 
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Shy94 said...
Sept. 19, 2013 at 2:10 pm:
This is a great poem. Very personal and well written. Good work.
 
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maelstrom14 said...
Sept. 6, 2013 at 6:58 pm:
this is very good i know what you meen although i love the rain :)
 
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KaylaDayann said...
Aug. 30, 2013 at 12:35 am:
I really enjoyed reading your peom. It had so many details I imaged myself being there while it rained. Keep up the good work
 
FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 1, 2013 at 4:39 pm :
I like this poem, nice work of imagery
 
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iDragonfly said...
Aug. 29, 2013 at 10:08 pm:
I really like this! It is a good spoken word poem with a good amount of description and powerful language. I never thought of Rain has shuddering before, do you mean the water that vibrates on the car window because of the speed? or surface tension on a lake? I am very intrigued!
 
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fake_smile said...
Aug. 17, 2013 at 6:14 pm:
I really like this poem! you used fantastic imagery.
 
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