Idiosyncratic MAG

August 30, 2008
By Colorful4u SILVER, Orange, Texas
Colorful4u SILVER, Orange, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around."
-Leo Buscagilia


Thoughts are mistaken for many plots.
When you think, others think not.
Ideas are tarnished as you soliloquize.
Eccentric as you know it, you realize;
Cynical but sweet gestures relax your mind
and interpreting language that does not rhyme.

Uncanny is the technique you depict your thoughts.

You’re lovely; however, your intelligence is your fault.


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Nyrihaz said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 4:24 pm
Nyrihaz, Isabela, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Listen to the screams a silent room makes"

Oh, good choice of words. My favorite lines is this one: 'When you think, others think not' It says a lot. I love how you are able to express intelligence as a fault and not a good traid (because, really, it can be a bad trait of not used well). Now, sincerly, you are a great writer. And I love the tittle.

Bye!
Nyrihaz


HelloLove said...
on May. 10 2010 at 12:29 pm
HelloLove, Dexter, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Twinkle, twinkle, little bat! How I wonder what you're at.
-Hatter
Tut, tut, child! Everything's got a moral, if only you can find it.
-Dutchess

This is very well written, very well chosen words! :)

on May. 5 2010 at 8:44 pm
Karma_Chameleon SILVER, English, Indiana
8 articles 0 photos 236 comments

Favorite Quote:
To be able to say "I love you" one must first be able to say "I" - Ayn Rand

I have to say, I loved this piece! Truly my kind of poem, and definitely a new favorite!

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 3:17 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Very nice poem! By the way, what does idiosyncratic mean?

on Apr. 2 2010 at 10:43 pm
Colorful4u SILVER, Orange, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around."
-Leo Buscagilia

Thank you Brookiejay. Should I recognize you perchance?

on Apr. 2 2010 at 9:36 pm
bahbahbahrooooke. SILVER, Lumberton, Texas
5 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
“An eye for eye only ends up making the whole world blind.”

your really inspriational, i have talked to you alot! i wish i really knew you (:

on Mar. 23 2010 at 7:52 am
salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees."
-Che Guevara

I'm breathless. This poem is like a mirror for me, showing my own faults. It uses phenomenal vocabulary; I'm just absolutely blown away.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 3:42 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

i love how you wrote the ending. it was very creative. i loved the theme of the poem also. check out a few of mine and let me know watcha think. love it!! much appriciated.

on Jan. 14 2010 at 11:24 am
silent-one BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
things arent always as they seem.

i love your choice of words.

on Dec. 25 2009 at 10:32 pm
Colorful4u SILVER, Orange, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around."
-Leo Buscagilia

Thank you all for your comments :) I am also very open to any suggestions or criticism.

on Dec. 23 2009 at 8:25 pm
ashleygurl BRONZE, Marshall, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
some say the world will end if fire, some say ice,from what i've tasted of desire, i hold with those who favor,but if i had to perish twice,from what i know of hate, ice is also great, and would suffice.






-Robert F.

ok it just dont work so ignor the whole thing lol

on Dec. 23 2009 at 8:24 pm
ashleygurl BRONZE, Marshall, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
some say the world will end if fire, some say ice,from what i've tasted of desire, i hold with those who favor,but if i had to perish twice,from what i know of hate, ice is also great, and would suffice.






-Robert F.

ok the thing in [------] wuz suposed to be

[ ♥ ] k

on Dec. 23 2009 at 8:23 pm
ashleygurl BRONZE, Marshall, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
some say the world will end if fire, some say ice,from what i've tasted of desire, i hold with those who favor,but if i had to perish twice,from what i know of hate, ice is also great, and would suffice.






-Robert F.

though this poem is beautiful....inteligence is not a fault, it is a rare quality!!! [ &hearts ] ashley

Leena2014 said...
on Dec. 23 2009 at 7:08 pm
UH-MAYZ-ING!!!!!!

on Dec. 9 2009 at 7:57 pm
Colorful4u SILVER, Orange, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around."
-Leo Buscagilia

Thank you!

Amanda S. said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 6:51 pm
Incredible. Keep writing!

on Sep. 9 2009 at 6:59 pm
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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it just speeks to the reader... as iluvsoccer50 said, "beautiful..."

on May. 28 2009 at 10:39 pm
imperfection GOLD, Gilroy, California
17 articles 9 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream as though you'll live forever, live as though you'll die today."
~James Dean (1931-1955), American Motion Picture Actor, symbol of rebellion

beautiful...


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