Idiosyncratic

This is a very interesting poem. I don't totally understand it but i know enough to say it is amazing.... really well written and i like the thought about intelligence... thank you! :)

Luv the poem.

Hear my rechid thoughts comibed with yours

here my thoughts awaken souls of deep dark fears

Of what your scared of do not be because together you and me

I love the last line.

I like the fact that this poem made me think because more often than not I scan over a poem, get the gist of it, and forget about it. This piece will forever be ingrained in my memory. This is because not only is the vocabulary superb (I actually had to look up 2 of the words) but the meaning is something I've never seen before. The thought that intelligence could be the fault rather than the lack of it is an enigma. Overall it's a lovely poem so please keep writing.

I believe that the poem is creative, but, for one thing, it is offbeat. It isn't a limerick. Also, it is foolish to say that intelligence is a fault. Pride is a fault; intelligence ISN'T. It sounds like you're expressing the envy that so many people hold against intelligent people. Still, your wording was very colorful. Nice work. 

that was freaking amazing! o.O

That's awesome! love it! Keep writing!!!!!!

 

I actually found this from somebody's favorites, and I'm glad they like it, because I do too. The words you used made it especially descriptive, with out being overbearing. Thank you fro writing it, it's now one of my favorites.

This is so clever that I'm not sure I completely understand it... All I know is that I appreciate your ability to rhyme words that some people can't even say. :D

Really liked the whole piece and the rhyme. The last line is my favorite.

really good word choice and i love your ryhme scheme! Amazing poem! thanks for posting!

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Good choice of words. I think it is amazing that you are able to express  your intelligence through extravagant words. Keep writing!!!!

Amazing use of rythm and vocabulary. A definite 5 my dear :)

Sorry hit 4 stars by accident!!! 5 all the way!!!

Oh, good choice of words. My favorite lines is this one: 'When you think, others think not' It says a lot. I love how you are able to express intelligence as a fault and not a good traid (because, really, it can be a bad trait of not used well). Now, sincerly, you are a great writer. And I love the tittle.

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Nyrihaz

This is very well written, very well chosen words! :)

I have to say, I loved this piece! Truly my kind of poem, and definitely a new favorite!

Very nice poem! By the way, what does idiosyncratic mean?

I'm breathless. This poem is like a mirror for me, showing my own faults. It uses phenomenal vocabulary; I'm just absolutely blown away.

i love how you wrote the ending. it was very creative. i loved the theme of the poem also. check out a few of mine and let me know watcha think. love it!! much appriciated.

i love your choice of words.

Thank you all for your comments :) I am also very open to any suggestions or criticism.

though this poem is beautiful....inteligence is not a fault, it is a rare quality!!! [ &hearts ] ashley

UH-MAYZ-ING!!!!!!

Incredible. Keep writing!

it just speeks to the reader... as iluvsoccer50 said, "beautiful..."

beautiful...