Suicide

April 12, 2013
By swim_2017 GOLD, El Paso, Illinois
swim_2017 GOLD, El Paso, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Strength does not come from winning. Your struggles develop your strengths. When you go through hardships and decide not to surrender that is strength.-Arnold Schwarzenegger


There once was a girl who OD'd from her failures she wished to be freed.
It was kind of ironic and a little sardonic. That at dying she knew she could succeed.



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swim_2017 GOLD said...
on May. 27 2013 at 11:13 am
swim_2017 GOLD, El Paso, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Strength does not come from winning. Your struggles develop your strengths. When you go through hardships and decide not to surrender that is strength.-Arnold Schwarzenegger

Thanks so much i will do that in my next york!

on Apr. 20 2013 at 11:50 pm
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM, Rogers, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams-Eleanor Roosevelt

Wow, this poem is so sad, but it really hits you.  For structure, I would seperate the lines more, becuase it was a little hard to read the rhymes at first.  But otherwise than that, love it!


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