April 12, 2013
There once was a girl who OD'd from her failures she wished to be freed.
It was kind of ironic and a little sardonic. That at dying she knew she could succeed.

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swim_2017 said...
May 27, 2013 at 11:13 am
Thanks so much i will do that in my next york!
WaffleOcean2934 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 20, 2013 at 11:50 pm
Wow, this poem is so sad, but it really hits you.  For structure, I would seperate the lines more, becuase it was a little hard to read the rhymes at first.  But otherwise than that, love it!
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