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NOT YOUR AVERAGE LIMERICK

January 8, 2013
By Tenor1_Josh BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Tenor1_Josh BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Music is life and life is music

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A mom, a boy, and his dad
Enough one day he had.
Dad was sick
So in one slick
Move, he left his lad.

© Dillon O., Pompton Plains, NJ

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NOT YOUR AVERAGE LIMERICK. It's what I was feeling..... Also, it's different, and I like different.
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Tenor1_Josh BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 8:09 pm
Tenor1_Josh BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
3 articles 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Music is life and life is music

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Yes, I am a guy, and I am a singer!
Rolledthestone SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 6:49 pm
Rolledthestone SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You hypocrite, first take the plank out of your own eye, and then you will see clearly to remove the speck from your brother’s eye." (Matthew 7:5) and "All the poeple who supported slavery were free, all the people who support abortion live..."

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You sing too?! Cute.
Rolledthestone SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 2:13 pm
Rolledthestone SILVER, Nowhere, Other
8 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You hypocrite, first take the plank out of your own eye, and then you will see clearly to remove the speck from your brother’s eye." (Matthew 7:5) and "All the poeple who supported slavery were free, all the people who support abortion live..."

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Agreed. Not ur average limerick. Very blunt but rhyming which is not something I'm used to reading. Suggestions wise I can only say that I'm left with a feeling of "So?" I think I'm just used to reading more into things and multiple interpretations but if you are satisfied with it then who am I to judge? In an unrelated comment, are you a guy? Because the world totally needs more guy poets or maybe I just don't know many. Anyway, 5/5 poem!!!