Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Limerick > NOT YOUR AVERAGE LIMERICK NOT YOUR AVERAGE LIMERICK By Tenor1_Josh, South Plainfield, NJ More by this author Enough one day he had. Dad was sick So in one slick Move, he left his lad. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 3 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Rolledthestone said... Jan. 16, 2013 at 2:13 pm: Agreed. Not ur average limerick. Very blunt but rhyming which is not something I'm used to reading. Suggestions wise I can only say that I'm left with a feeling of "So?" I think I'm just used to reading more into things and multiple interpretations but if you are satisfied with it then who am I to judge? In an unrelated comment, are you a guy? Because the world totally needs more guy poets or maybe I just don't know many. Anyway, 5/5 poem!!! Rolledthestone replied... Jan. 16, 2013 at 6:49 pm : You sing too?! Cute. Tenor1_Josh replied... Jan. 16, 2013 at 8:09 pm : Yes, I am a guy, and I am a singer!