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NOT YOUR AVERAGE LIMERICK

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A mom, a boy, and his dad
Enough one day he had.
Dad was sick
So in one slick
Move, he left his lad.



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Rolledthestone This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 2:13 pm
Agreed. Not ur average limerick. Very blunt but rhyming which is not something I'm used to reading. Suggestions wise I can only say that I'm left with a feeling of "So?" I think I'm just used to reading more into things and multiple interpretations but if you are satisfied with it then who am I to judge? In an unrelated comment, are you a guy? Because the world totally needs more guy poets or maybe I just don't know many. Anyway, 5/5 poem!!!  
 
Rolledthestone This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 6:49 pm
You sing too?! Cute.
 
Tenor1_Josh replied...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 8:09 pm
Yes, I am a guy, and I am a singer!
 
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