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You Saved Me

September 8, 2012
By Del_Mundo_Otro BRONZE, Turnersville, New Jersey
Del_Mundo_Otro BRONZE, Turnersville, New Jersey
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You’ve saved me from sadness
Calmed me from anger
Introduced me to bliss as soon as we kissed
You’ve taught me to fly
Were there when I cried
And showed me the limits are way past the sky
I learned how to live
With every second you give
and realize that I am in love
now as I wait to see you again
I see what my heart tells me is true
With all the experiences I hold in my hand
I really believe that I love you


The author's comments:
I've been writing for a few years now but I just joined so I'll start to send in some of my earlier work. This is one of my first poems, simple and sweet.

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on Sep. 17 2012 at 10:16 am
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND, Auburntown, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Are We Happy Plastic People"- Casting Crowns "While we're sung to sleep by philosophies that save the trees and kill the children" - Casting Crowns "It's such a secret place, the land of tears"Antoine de Saint-Exupery

Okay great ill definately check them out...you should check out some of my work and tell me what you think

on Sep. 14 2012 at 5:10 pm
Del_Mundo_Otro BRONZE, Turnersville, New Jersey
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thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. I'll submit more soon

on Sep. 14 2012 at 11:16 am
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND, Auburntown, Tennessee
57 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Are We Happy Plastic People"- Casting Crowns "While we're sung to sleep by philosophies that save the trees and kill the children" - Casting Crowns "It's such a secret place, the land of tears"Antoine de Saint-Exupery

This is so cute...you did a great job!! keep up the work :)