October 20, 2011
By Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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You are indecision
The sudden pitter-patter of raindrops
Stomping violently against my already scratched window
Reaching a full
But wanting to finish what you started
To fully break the glass into a million shattered piece
To leave it undone

You are disaster
A war within yourself and a battle of two sides
Known as a traitor to both waves of men that you rule over
So unjustly and cruelly,
Leaving them begging

You are death
Causing heads to roll from anguish of your own despair
And yet, you seem to have more than all
To be able to slaughter any man
With a single command, with a single word can be
And the whole power lies
In your

And the bittersweet truth is that
The possibility for a change of tides is quite low
But you don’t care
For who wishes total control to go?

The author's comments:
This piece was written based on the French Revolution, specifically about Louis the 16th and his betrayal towards his people

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on Oct. 30 2011 at 7:21 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments

Thank you so much!

Of course i will

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2011 at 2:09 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Love this. Check out my work sometime if you have the chance?

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