AmnesiA

July 5, 2011
By Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
My fav quote (4now)
When I met you my heart skipped a beat..... the sun became the moon & cold became heat.... Roses weren't red an violetes weren't blue.....And all because i fell IN LIKE WITH YOU <3


There once was something I use to know
But I locked it away deep inside
It was important, what was it?
And why is it trying to hide

I looked everywhere for it
In my heart, my soul, my brain
I’ve spent my whole life searching for it
But nothing have I gained

Whatever it is, I miss it dearly
And I hope that I can find it soon
It’s been missing for the longest time
It’ll be 13 years this June

I’ll look one last place
And that place is the past
To see if I can find it there
I think I might be able to see something
But what is it?
And where?

I found this colorful box.
A present? But what could it be
There’s just a plain mirror inside.
At least that’s all that I can see

But this can’t be right
This is not what I’m looking for
There must be something I can’t see
What did I use to know?
Wait. Was it me?


The author's comments:
PLEASE RATE AND LEAVE COMMENTS.! THNX.! ALSO PLEASE LOOK AT THE OTHER POEM NAME Amnesia (no second capital A) AND TELL ME WHICH ONE YOU LIKE BETTER THNX>!

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on Jul. 19 2011 at 1:11 pm
Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
My fav quote (4now)
When I met you my heart skipped a beat..... the sun became the moon & cold became heat.... Roses weren't red an violetes weren't blue.....And all because i fell IN LIKE WITH YOU <3

thnx.! i really appreciate your feed back on both poems

on Jul. 19 2011 at 11:18 am
LyricalBeauty GOLD, Fontana, California
14 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
" 'I am happy' that's just the saddest lie..."

"I think that all the silence is worse than all the violence. Fear is such a weak emotion, that's why I despise it..."

Beautiful. The last stanza really did it for me ^_^ Great job; I loved it!

If you can, please check out my poems. Comments/Rates are always appreciated. Thanks!(=


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on Jul. 14 2011 at 5:49 pm
OceanFey GOLD, North Potomac, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
It is easy to hate and it is difficult to love. This is how the whole scheme of things works. All good things are difficult to achieve; and bad things are very easy to get. - Confucius

I really like the last line :D


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