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February 1, 2011
By Jess_J. BRONZE, Rochester, Minnesota
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The Black smoke Spiraled high into the sky,
It smelled like rotten poo,
Sounded like ship horns blowing nigh,
Tasted horrible in my mouth,
As it hit my cheeks bitterly too.
I also like writing Haiku!

© Garrett M., Port Angeles, WA

The author's comments:
A hurricane that hit my state inspired this wierd limerick.:)
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