black or white?

By Kali-Mah, Savannah, GA

Will this world end in black or white?
Will we all suffer from a terrible fight?
Were all stubborn when is comes to war
It’s like we sign a petition when soldiers go from door to door.
All war brings is pain and loss
We just want it all to stop!
Next time someone asks you to fight
Close your eyes and get them out of your sight
So will the world end in black or white?
That’s our choice to choose our fights

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timeformetofly7 said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 9:39 am:

wow, thats a good point. er message, or watever. Awesome job!! its fantastic :^)

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Lou Lou said...
Feb. 6, 2011 at 3:14 pm:

Once again, what insight to a young teen that can write such an insight to war who is so young....

htrae22 replied...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 4:30 pm :

this is really well done good job

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angel said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 3:09 am:

Beautifully written with deerp insight for one so young. Congratulations, Well done.

Kali-Mah replied...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 3:13 am :

Thank you it came from within the inner workings of my mind and point of view toward the way our government chooses to work things out which is by fighting.