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Growing Up

An addiction thrives,
inside these broken lives
hearts of gold melt tonight
Innocence never survives





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Ahlixe said...
Dec. 29, 2010 at 6:52 pm

oh bby I'm so proud of you!

<3

 

 
spiria said...
Dec. 28, 2010 at 12:03 am

My favorite line: Hearts of gold melt tonight

I think it conveys that innocence is lost even better than the last line.

I also like what you said about how you were addicted to the way things were. It's very true.

 
MakeItShine said...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 12:33 pm
This says a lot in only a few words. It is bittersweet, kind of reminiscent of the past innoncence that we cannot seem to hold on to, and still kind of optimistic about the future being bright despite it all. Very nice. (:
 
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