one boy's world

At night he cries…
He cries because everyone
tells him nothing but lies…
he cant take it anymore…
because of all the things gone and past,
this boy is nothing but sore…

he cant think without you on his mind…
and it seems every time he turns around
hes somehow in a bind…
it hurts so many, just to see how hurt he really is…
but we all know its you that he really does miss…

why did you have to leave…him all alone in this
crazy messed up world…? This world that to him
seems to be so cold…
you left him, without even a single hand to hold…
he tries, hard as he can just to get by…
but sometimes he thinks its not even worth a try…
but no matter what he never gives up…
sometimes he looks like that lost little pup…
but its just because hes lost you…
because he did and always will love you!





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tell.me.that.youll.stay said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 11:09 pm
awwwwwwwwwwwww omg!!! like omg!!! hah, but yeah it is super emotional... i love this, and i liked the line "he cant think without you on his mind" that was really beautiful, good job!! this is truly something to be proud of- it's a great piece
 
natashajeanne1021 replied...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 11:19 pm
lol thanks i only write the truth and i really appreciate the comment thanks soooo much for reading this!! =) you should also check out some more of my work and let me know what you think? =)
 
passionfuture13 said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 12:51 pm
this is super emotional. i love the reason you actually wrote this and i love that you dedicated it to him. i wish him the best of luck.
 
natashajeanne1021 replied...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 9:26 pm
thanks! and it means a lot to me that you took the time to read this and to leave a comment! =) hes doing better now he moved away and is tryin to start over so i hope he does a lot better now on
 
passionfuture13 replied...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:53 am
i cant believe he moved away from you. surely that must be very hard.
 
natashajeanne1021 replied...
Nov. 1, 2010 at 12:08 am
its ok, im only glad he decided to do whats best for him and that he is following his dreams, and i hope he can make them come true!! =)
 
passionfuture13 replied...
Nov. 1, 2010 at 10:08 am
how far is he away from you? are you to still close?
 
natashajeanne1021 replied...
Nov. 1, 2010 at 1:24 pm
anaA couple states lol
 
natashajeanne1021 replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 4:52 pm
**i meant a couple states sorry my computer was being stupid 
 
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