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Boy, someday soon I hope you find that girl
That you swear is the only in the world.
She can flirt and smile,
Getting dressed takes a while,
And rain makes her "straight" hair, curled.

Boy, maybe you'll be relieved to know
That she loves hot weather and hates the snow.
She has no passion
But she's always in fashion
And says poetry is "totally emo."

Boy, I hope you're happy when all she wants to do
Is talk about how she's not good enough for you.
Although, in my mind -
Though it may not be kind -
I know this is absolutely true.

Boy, you see, I cannot flirt,
A little bit of rain never hurt,
I hate the heat,
Poetry is my heartbeat,
And quite frankly, that girl will treat you like dirt.

Boy, I believe you and I could be
More than just an epiphany.
But alas, I'm too shy,
So I guess I'll stand by
While "you and I" become "you and she".



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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 1:56 pm:
this is the first boy and girl poem i've ever liked. i dont read these because it brings out the talentless part of people, or maybe they're not talented at all. but i love this one. you are quite talented ma copine. 5 stars. fait ta danse.
 
JosieNotJose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 4:15 pm :
Awh thank you!  Your comments are very much appreciated :)
 
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hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 4:34 pm:

YAY I loved it!!! I wrote one with the same idea to it, omg we're phsycic!!

(It's Hannah Beth by the way)

 
JosieNotJose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 4:44 pm :
OMG WHO ARE YOU?!  D:  I kid, I kid. We are psychic!  That's why we're in the same creative writing class :D  And I'm glad you liked it! 
 
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XblakeY said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:41 pm:
Yes they are! I'd love if you'd check some of my stuff out!
 
JosieNotJose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 11:16 am :
I sure will!
 
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XblakeY said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 9:35 pm:
Even though I am a girl, I absolutely love this! I can just picture some girls I know that this fits perfectly! Nice work, it flows great!  
 
JosieNotJose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 10:26 pm :
Thank you so much!  I was getting kind of tired of the girl stereotype and decided to just make fun of it all (plus limericks are always fun). :) 
 
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