Someday Soon

June 10, 2010
By JosieNotJose SILVER, West Palm Beach, Florida
JosieNotJose SILVER, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Boy, someday soon I hope you find that girl
That you swear is the only in the world.
She can flirt and smile,
Getting dressed takes a while,
And rain makes her "straight" hair, curled.

Boy, maybe you'll be relieved to know
That she loves hot weather and hates the snow.
She has no passion
But she's always in fashion
And says poetry is "totally emo."

Boy, I hope you're happy when all she wants to do
Is talk about how she's not good enough for you.
Although, in my mind -
Though it may not be kind -
I know this is absolutely true.

Boy, you see, I cannot flirt,
A little bit of rain never hurt,
I hate the heat,
Poetry is my heartbeat,
And quite frankly, that girl will treat you like dirt.

Boy, I believe you and I could be
More than just an epiphany.
But alas, I'm too shy,
So I guess I'll stand by
While "you and I" become "you and she".

The author's comments:
I thought I'd make a poem poking fun at what a girl is "supposed" to be. Please don't be offended, there was no harm intended.

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on Aug. 13 2010 at 4:15 pm
JosieNotJose SILVER, West Palm Beach, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments
Awh thank you!  Your comments are very much appreciated :)

on Aug. 12 2010 at 1:56 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

this is the first boy and girl poem i've ever liked. i dont read these because it brings out the talentless part of people, or maybe they're not talented at all. but i love this one. you are quite talented ma copine. 5 stars. fait ta danse.

on Aug. 10 2010 at 4:44 pm
JosieNotJose SILVER, West Palm Beach, Florida
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OMG WHO ARE YOU?!  D:  I kid, I kid. We are psychic!  That's why we're in the same creative writing class :D  And I'm glad you liked it! 

on Aug. 10 2010 at 4:34 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

YAY I loved it!!! I wrote one with the same idea to it, omg we're phsycic!!

(It's Hannah Beth by the way)


on Aug. 10 2010 at 11:16 am
JosieNotJose SILVER, West Palm Beach, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments
I sure will!

XblakeY SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:41 pm
XblakeY SILVER, Haverhill, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Open the door that nobody thought could be opened,
Life is behind it,
We don't have an eternity to realize our dreams,
Only the time we are here,
if you risk nothing....your risking everything. ♥

Yes they are! I'd love if you'd check some of my stuff out!

on Aug. 8 2010 at 10:26 pm
JosieNotJose SILVER, West Palm Beach, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments
Thank you so much!  I was getting kind of tired of the girl stereotype and decided to just make fun of it all (plus limericks are always fun). :) 

XblakeY SILVER said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 9:35 pm
XblakeY SILVER, Haverhill, Massachusetts
5 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Open the door that nobody thought could be opened,
Life is behind it,
We don't have an eternity to realize our dreams,
Only the time we are here,
if you risk nothing....your risking everything. ♥

Even though I am a girl, I absolutely love this! I can just picture some girls I know that this fits perfectly! Nice work, it flows great!  


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