Escaping

July 6, 2010
By TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"


I scream, yell, shake

you look at me in horror

I leave you in my wake.



Already out of the hall

into the outside world

the rain starts to fall

on my already wet face


The author's comments:
another poem i found in my diary. i adjusted it a little. always liked this :)

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on Aug. 1 2010 at 3:12 pm
smieyface212 SILVER, Beachwood, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have many of these, but here's a main one:
"Animals our not ours to eat, wear or torture, they help us and our environment, and we need to take care of their environment and give them love in return"

This is really great, and I kind of see where you're coming from, but I think that this needs a little bit more organization, I don't really understand it that well, like your point isn't really clear to me, but other than that, this was nice :) I love your selection of words, mature, yet non-complicated. Keep it up!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:22 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so great!!!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!




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