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I scream, yell, shake

you look at me in horror

I leave you in my wake.



Already out of the hall

into the outside world

the rain starts to fall

on my already wet face




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smieyface212 said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 3:12 pm:
This is really great, and I kind of see where you're coming from, but I think that this needs a little bit more organization, I don't really understand it that well, like your point isn't really clear to me, but other than that, this was nice :) I love your selection of words, mature, yet non-complicated. Keep it up!
 
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crubs3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:22 pm:
This is so great!!!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
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