Point of Life

June 15, 2010
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Life is like a bed of roses,
And to support this I have many causes,
Life has petals, and has thorns,
It makes you experienced but worn,
Leaving you with a lot of bruises.

Life can make you sad,
By causing many experiences bad,
However, it can bless providential bliss,
It can feel like a lovely kiss,
Life is hard to live without getting mad.

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just.me_899 said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 10:44 pm
this is so true....awesome poem.. i love how u related Life to roses...its perfect
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 6:03 pm
Wow this is so great. i love it and im sorry about what happend :(  if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great especially to anonymous thanx and ur really good!
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