In My Dream's

June 18, 2010
By ray-ray96 BRONZE, Trenton, Georgia
ray-ray96 BRONZE, Trenton, Georgia
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A big field outlined with miles of forest
hear the angels sing,the lyrics the chorus
i have no fear i feel no pain
the flowers grow yet it never rains
the sky is so blue,with clouds like a cover
the air smells of polem,like no other
i think to myself,this dream will only last for so long
it will end like the ending of a wonderfull song

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on Jul. 19 2010 at 5:59 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
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on Jul. 19 2010 at 3:04 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

:)) that was pretty ^^ i loved it!! excellent word choicee

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