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In My Dream's

A big field outlined with miles of forest
hear the angels sing,the lyrics the chorus
i have no fear i feel no pain
the flowers grow yet it never rains
the sky is so blue,with clouds like a cover
the air smells of polem,like no other
i think to myself,this dream will only last for so long
it will end like the ending of a wonderfull song





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 5:59 pm
Wow i love this!! it just gives you this floating feeling!!  if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!
 
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Jul. 19, 2010 at 3:04 pm
:)) that was pretty ^^ i loved it!! excellent word choicee
 
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