Fading reality

May 1, 2010
By sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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Deep sleep
Reality fading away
Calm and quiet
Peaceful bliss
Until the nightmare creeps in

Unlocking the secrets
You didn’t know you had
Finding new things about yourself
Some good, some bad

The author's comments:
was supposed to be 2 poems, but they were too short to submit so I had to combine them

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on May. 23 2010 at 4:24 pm
Sarah32196 BRONZE, Glendale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
The Irony Of Life Is That The Moment You Feel The Most Alive, Is The Moment You're About To Die.

short but sweet. great poems i love them(:

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on May. 23 2010 at 10:15 am
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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Both Short Both Simple... Both very good. You make a point thats very easy to understand in just a couple of lines which is terrific keep it up! check me out :]

InsaneLooks said...
on May. 22 2010 at 6:28 pm
InsaneLooks, Fresno, California
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wow i know what u mean i get the point of this poem :) keep up the good job :)


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