Moving On.

March 9, 2010
There once was a world full of pain,
And no one tried to complain.
Every tear was wiped fast,
Trying to forget the past.
Now everyone faces their rain.





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CountryGothic said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 2:59 pm
This is good, very pretty in the wording.
 
dreamer_believer said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 9:58 am
amazing! it took my breath away :) i like the idea of "everyone faces their rain". that's really creative and very deep. bravo :) 5 stars all the way. would you please comment on some of my work? :) thanks! keep writing.
 
justbe-3 said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 4:11 pm
That was good, nice ending
 
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