My Reflection

February 16, 2010
By Babyangel495 BRONZE, Phila, Pennsylvania
Babyangel495 BRONZE, Phila, Pennsylvania
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There is a girl in my room crying tonight,
I try to smile and tell her its alright.
The more I say, the harder I try,
Her tears get louder as she continues to cry.
Listening to the world around me,
I tell people I am okay so they won't really see.
As I look in the mirror of my reflection,
I see a sad girl who knows rejection.
I turn away not wanting to look any longer,
I realize now that the Girl is stronger,
I look in the mirror only once more,
As I watch a knock comes at my door.
There standing is the one i love,
like a beautiful angel sent from above.
Through blurry eyes i try to see,
Only then I know, the sad crying girl is none other than me.

The author's comments:
This Article is one i have written long ago. My heart is Always broken but it honestly dose make me stronger.

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on Feb. 25 2010 at 3:55 pm
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wow. i can totally relate. its very touching to me that you cud put a feeling like that into words. bravo! check out a few of mine and let me kno watcha think. love it!! much appriciated.

on Feb. 24 2010 at 12:01 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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Beautiful poem. It's really sad.


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