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Four letter word

Love isn't just a four letter word.
Add "d" and it becomes a verb.
Add "es" to see present tense,
As in "Rebecca loves Vince."
But it's a shame that Vince loves only Kurt.



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meadowood said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 1:28 pm:
Um - awesome!
 
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Mz.Minny2011 said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 8:23 pm:
HAHAHA LOL FUNI
 
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greatexpects:) said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 9:30 pm:
very cute and funny:)
 
htrae22 replied...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 4:31 pm :
good job love the rhymth
 
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jonas_chic899 said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 8:20 pm:
this is really good!! i applaud u :D
 
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*Myrissa* said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 11:29 am:
Thats an intresting way to look at the word. i mean i've read like hundreds of poem concerning love but this one, it takes on an idea of its own. i like it. maybe you can expand on it cus im so wanting more!!!
 
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Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 4:11 pm:
lol. i loved it!! it was cute and thoughtful. check out a few of mine and let me kno watcha think. love it!! much appriciated.
 
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EdwardP said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 4:50 pm:
nEAT AND CREATIVE iTS VOCABY
 
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chocolateharp said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 7:20 am:
This is so creative! The second line is a little confusing because of the "es"- to makes "loves" you only need an "s". I really liked the poem, though!
 
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BaiLiHua This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 4:40 pm:
So very quirky, a very interesting piece.
 
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SwordGirl said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 7:47 pm:
Clever! Where'd you get the idea for this?
 
thescientistyellow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 10:00 pm :
A mixture of English grammar rules and my own take on love...
 
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SmileyFace94 said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 10:12 am:
this is great! i especially love the beginning.
 
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Laughternchoclate said...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 9:48 am:
I really, really liked the beginning! I wish you made it longer... I really liked it.
 
thescientistyellow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 9:59 am :
Thank you! Well the reason for the length is because it's a traditional limerick..
 
ToriLovett replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 8:08 pm :
The beginning is nice... The ending doesn't flow that well. Other than that, great(:
 
Nikiblue replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 8:33 pm :
The beginning is good, but I agree with ToriLovett, the ending doesn't really flow. Good job though (:
 
*Myrissa* replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 11:31 am :
I think the endings perfect it leaves you hanging like, "What does that mean?" or "why did he say that." its so unique. like he just let you fall on all the things he could've said at the end. Nice work.
 
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