Limerick

So cute! It captures the simple, easy comedy that limericks often carry, yet flows very simply and cleverly. Very nice job!!

I have to abmit i do like the flow of the poem. But I can't believe something as simple as that could take the place of another poem, that actually took talent and time to write

Very funny and adorable!

This poem was very good I liked the rythme of it as well.

I love this poem because it's plain, simple, and funny. It reminds me of a poem that my brother wrote. I smile every time I read that poem, and this makes me happy as well.

Great limerick! I feel it really captured the amount of effort people go through to get on a diet, but then find themselves wishing they were back where they were in the beginning. They wanted to be skinnier or healthier but they didn't put the effort in and it shows how they cannot go without.

this poem is too funny to be taken seriously.

Haha, this actually made me laugh! xD

Haha I feel sorry for that boy because I know i could not live on just life savers lol

Props for writing a real limerick!!! first one on the page!! :) culd u possibly comment and rate my work??? especially to anonymous?? thanx and great job!! dont stop!!

hahah this is really cute and funny :)

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This is a really neat limerick! I hope you keep writing, it was very humerous.

Good Job! :)

-Lilac

haha this is cute:))

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Not very long but it was a good poem, I like how you didn't force rhymes

I WISH I HAD SOME LIFE-SAVERS RIGHT NOW!!!!

LOL i love this poem so much it is very fun and bouncy. Check out some of my work plz! Thnx!