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So if I stand here in this rainstorm any longer, will you wonder where I am? If I didn’t say a word, now, just shiver and stand. If it matters to you now that I have no umbrella or shoes, as I wait here on the corner for the ol’ painters muse. Your old, Mazda
SUV is what I long to see. But I wait in heavy rain, and think you forgot about me.



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kenna2013 said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 3:08 pm:
So good :) It is really modern and unique. Keep writing :) and maybe check out some of my work :)
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 11:53 pm:
i like it! it has a different type of ring to it, and i like the flow. creative and very good! :) check out some of my work and comment please, id love your opinion. oh and keep writing! :)
~dreamer
 
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