Aquas

March 27, 2017
By WolfWhisperer0911 PLATINUM, Crosby, Texas
WolfWhisperer0911 PLATINUM, Crosby, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder


Water is serene,
a palace of marine life
beating endless sand.


The author's comments:

This haiku is insired by Water and Waves by Warren_Uzumaki. Check him out, he is really awesome in his art!


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on Apr. 25 at 10:46 am
WolfWhisperer0911 PLATINUM, Crosby, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder

@Summer_R_Quinn This is the edited one, the previous one was the one that hwoodruff98 was talking about. Thank you for concern though! :)

on Apr. 23 at 1:18 pm
Summer_R_Quinn GOLD, Madison, South Dakota
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I don't know what hwoodruff98 is talking about, it's 5/7/5.

on Sep. 6 2017 at 10:53 am
WolfWhisperer0911 PLATINUM, Crosby, Texas
46 articles 0 photos 777 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder

@hwoodruff98 Thank you for your comment! :)

hwoodruff98 said...
on Apr. 9 2017 at 9:32 am
hwoodruff98, Lititz, Pennsylvania
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This is almost water-like in its flow and feeling of gentle peace. That being said, the last line isn't five syllables, so it's not technically following the 5/7/5 structure of a haiku. If you took out the word "the" from the last line, it would be perfect. Other than that, really great piece!


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