Ventus

March 27, 2017
By WolfWhisperer0911 PLATINUM, Crosby, Texas
WolfWhisperer0911 PLATINUM, Crosby, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder


The Wind is never weary,
a feral tempest summoned
within my troubled heart.



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on Apr. 25 at 10:44 am
WolfWhisperer0911 PLATINUM, Crosby, Texas
46 articles 0 photos 777 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder

@Summer_R_Quinn Thanks!

on Apr. 23 at 1:29 pm
Summer_R_Quinn GOLD, Madison, South Dakota
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This is great!

on May. 6 2017 at 8:06 pm
WolfWhisperer0911 PLATINUM, Crosby, Texas
46 articles 0 photos 777 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder

@devils_advocate Hi devils_advocate! I want to say from the bottom of heart, thank you for your kind and helpful comment. I a taking heart the advice that you given to me and I am working on this poem right now.I will try to channel my inner writer to turn my stories golden. I have some coming, so get ready for them! :) I had read some of your work, as you may had guess by the comments, and they are amazing! Once again, thank you for the comment and have a God-blessed day!

on May. 6 2017 at 11:22 am
tilly_collins PLATINUM, Spring, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Pain is inevitable, suffering is optional.
-Haruki Murakami

Hi, I'm devils_advocate! This piece is amazing! Just a few things you may or may not alter: maybe you could change "creating" to "developing" or even "summoning" to give it a more troubled connotation. You might also "wild" to "savage" or some other stronger word just to give your poem more flavor. Overall, I've read some of your work and you are really good! Just a little bit of channeling your inner writer and you will be golden!


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