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March 10, 2015
By Random100 DIAMOND, Iloilo, Other
Random100 DIAMOND, Iloilo, Other
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I’d like to swim in
the river but the drunken
sun has sipped it all



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on Sep. 16 2015 at 2:37 am
Random100 DIAMOND, Iloilo, Other
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Ui.... sabi ko na nga ba maraming pinoy dito sa teenink. salamat!!!!

on Sep. 15 2015 at 8:05 am
GillianBorromeo PLATINUM, San Pedro City, Laguna, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"The reward of a thing well done is having done it."

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Ang galing mo, kababayan!!

SunGod said...
on May. 6 2015 at 4:10 am
SunGod, None, Other
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This is so sensational. It really needs to be printed. check out mine too.

on Mar. 15 2015 at 1:14 am
Random100 DIAMOND, Iloilo, Other
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Salamat! (Thank you!)

on Mar. 13 2015 at 10:46 pm
theblondechick GOLD, Kingsport, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
I want to live and feel all the shades, tones, and variations of mental and physical experience possible in life.
And I am horribly limited.
-Sylvia Path

clever and such a metaphor for so many things.

on Mar. 13 2015 at 2:28 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

You have a lot of talent. Congratulations on the Editor's Award, you deserve it for this piece. It's very simple and yet incredibly thought-provoking, like haiku should be.


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