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January 10, 2015
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Constantly chasing

Looking ahead with wild eyes

It was always there






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PianoKeys97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 19, 2015 at 9:03 pm
Love your play on the idea of how something one looks for is right in front of them. Great job!
 
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Jan. 19, 2015 at 4:27 pm
Nice usage of words to give a feeling of desperation in searching, and completely turned it around with the last line. Great haiku!
 
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