Dream

January 10, 2015
By NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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Constantly chasing

Looking ahead with wild eyes

It was always there



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on Jan. 19 2015 at 9:03 pm
PianoKeys97 PLATINUM, Medford, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"You can be the ripest, juiciest peach in the world, and there's still going to be somebody who hates peaches." -Dita Von Teese

Love your play on the idea of how something one looks for is right in front of them. Great job!

on Jan. 19 2015 at 4:27 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

Nice usage of words to give a feeling of desperation in searching, and completely turned it around with the last line. Great haiku!




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