Sunday Morning MAG

December 29, 2008
By sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"We have to be continually jumping off cliffs and developing our wings on the way down." Kurt Vonnegut


Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.



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shizuka BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2011 at 4:15 pm
shizuka BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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good job and it is a very cool poem ! i like it! :D

l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 5 2011 at 2:08 pm
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky

great job with this piece it has a lot of detail without a lot of words.

Please check out my stuff and rate with honesty im dying for some feedback


on Mar. 28 2011 at 7:52 pm
luv_4_broadway GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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why do you say that?

on Mar. 28 2011 at 5:32 pm
You suck very much!

on Mar. 28 2011 at 1:35 pm
luv_4_broadway GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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So simple, yet so descriptive! Adorable!

TJRoeds BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2011 at 4:03 pm
TJRoeds BRONZE, Albany, Ohio
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but yet we exist as two

no matter how much we disagree

we have to coexist you see


on Mar. 24 2011 at 12:07 pm
ventureroftheunknown BRONZE, Adell, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
you don't have to keep me falling, but it'd sure be cool if you did.

love it love it love it

on Mar. 24 2011 at 12:07 pm
ventureroftheunknown BRONZE, Adell, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
you don't have to keep me falling, but it'd sure be cool if you did.

i dont like that sunshine12 put such harsh feedback. ive gotten lots of that before and it only makes you stop writing for weeks it took me a long time to start writing again; even longer to share with others, i was afraid others would read it and scoff like the other haters out there; if you dont like it; keep your mouth closed because other people do.

on Mar. 14 2011 at 8:47 pm
CarrieAnne11 GOLD, Potsdam, New York
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I love this poem. So simple, which is what makes it amazing. And it's about coffee- one of my favorite things, and something timeless and relatable. Nice job :)

TJRoeds BRONZE said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 8:12 pm
TJRoeds BRONZE, Albany, Ohio
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Nice use of a simple thing that many people enjoy, coffee.  While it is an acquired taste, I think everyone can realize the meaning behind it, even if they aren't particularly fond of the taste themselves.

 

:) look forward to more of your works


TJRoeds BRONZE said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 8:09 pm
TJRoeds BRONZE, Albany, Ohio
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In case you were unclear.

 

While this is a poem, it is also a haiku.

Haiku are most commonly said to have 17 syllables.  In traditional Japanese haiku however, it is 17 moras.  I quote, a mora is “Something of which a long syllable consists of two and a short syllable consists of one.”

5

7

5


sunshine12 said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 6:04 pm
The poem sould be long and it is boring. It need a wow in it. 

MKimmi said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 4:05 pm
MKimmi, NY, New York
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r u a dude?

on Mar. 14 2011 at 9:40 am
Monkee63 SILVER, Independence, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"I want to feel my life while I'm in it"- Meryl Streep
"Live, Life Love"
"Everybody wants happiness, nobody wants pain, but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain."

I agree with everyone else who said this, this is great because its simple.

on Mar. 12 2011 at 3:53 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
32 articles 4 photos 178 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

 love this haiku too! It is perfect, and sweet, and i agree, it is beautiful because it is simple!

helllosd said...
on Mar. 7 2011 at 2:19 pm
hey lob=ve it to.,!

on Feb. 23 2011 at 12:06 pm
KaylaKandiBear BRONZE, Streamwood, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"If you're sad, go buy yourself a happy meal and play with some kittens."

I looove this haiku! Haiku's are my favorite form of poetry...this is beautiful because it's simple.

on Feb. 20 2011 at 10:06 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

aaahh loveitloveitloveit. fun sized :)

on Feb. 20 2011 at 10:05 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

i saw this on the homepage and i clicked on it to see the rest......then i realized there was no rest :)

adorable<3


on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:26 pm
singinginthegardn GOLD, Cowell, Massachusetts
16 articles 2 photos 158 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anaïs Nin

It is so simple yet pretty! I really like how thought-provoking it was...great job! <33 please check out my work?! Ahh thankssss :)


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