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Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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TJRoeds said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 8:12 pm:

Nice use of a simple thing that many people enjoy, coffee.  While it is an acquired taste, I think everyone can realize the meaning behind it, even if they aren't particularly fond of the taste themselves.

 

:) look forward to more of your works

 
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Monkee63 said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 9:40 am:
I agree with everyone else who said this, this is great because its simple.
 
sunshine12 replied...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 6:04 pm :
The poem sould be long and it is boring. It need a wow in it. 
 
TJRoeds replied...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 8:09 pm :

In case you were unclear.

 

While this is a poem, it is also a haiku.

Haiku are most commonly said to have 17 syllables.  In traditional Japanese haiku however, it is 17 moras.  I quote, a mora is “Something of which a long syllable consists of two and a short syllable consists of one.”

5

7

5

 
cnoevilspeaknoevilhearnoevil replied...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 12:07 pm :
i dont like that sunshine12 put such harsh feedback. ive gotten lots of that before and it only makes you stop writing for weeks it took me a long time to start writing again; even longer to share with others, i was afraid others would read it and scoff like the other haters out there; if you dont like it; keep your mouth closed because other people do.
 
TJRoeds replied...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 4:03 pm :

but yet we exist as two

no matter how much we disagree

we have to coexist you see

 
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beach said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 3:53 pm:
 love this haiku too! It is perfect, and sweet, and i agree, it is beautiful because it is simple!
 
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kgkitten13VII said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 12:06 pm:
I looove this haiku! Haiku's are my favorite form of poetry...this is beautiful because it's simple.
 
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PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 10:05 pm:

i saw this on the homepage and i clicked on it to see the rest......then i realized there was no rest :)

adorable<3

 
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HollerGirl26 said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 7:26 pm:
It is so simple yet pretty! I really like how thought-provoking it was...great job! <33 please check out my work?! Ahh thankssss :)
 
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SummerDays11 said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 5:26 pm:
So simple, So Beautiful
 
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black_butler said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 10:44 pm:
Hey.. It is a very cute haiku poem.. Loved the simplicity of it :)
 
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luvsoccer3000 said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 2:30 pm:
this is so adorable! its simple but yet i keep reading it over and over again. great job!
 
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danibean11 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:43 pm:
I love the way my senses were captivated by this! I immediately felt at home with the scent of coffee.
 
Lilybean17 replied...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:47 pm :

I know, right?!

 

 
amirg86 replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 11:08 am :
i like it but it seems kind of crazy
 
Hejlna replied...
May 19, 2011 at 2:05 pm :
I think it's perfect, not crazy.
 
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ale93_ said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:42 pm:

its really nice 

its so small but it says so much 

 
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lovetowrite22 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 10:32 pm:
i love your poem! it was so simple yet so powerful. keep up the good work!:) please come look at my writing, thanks:)
 
sarahconway This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 31, 2011 at 5:57 pm :
This is so cute!  I love it!  It sounds just like my life!  Very nice!
 
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