Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Sunday Morning
Swanson said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 11:53 am:
Apr. 6, 2011 at 11:53 am:
I liked this poem because I love coffee and I felt that they used a great metaphor compareing someone with coffee
kvater said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 11:52 am:
Apr. 6, 2011 at 11:52 am:
i really liked this poem, its simple and i like the imagery.
shizukagood job and it is a very cool poem ! i like it! :D
great job with this piece it has a lot of detail without a lot of words.
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luv_4_broadway
So simple, yet so descriptive! Adorable!
love it love it love it
callmeVieve11I love this poem. So simple, which is what makes it amazing. And it's about coffee- one of my favorite things, and something timeless and relatable. Nice job :)
Nice use of a simple thing that many people enjoy, coffee. While it is an acquired taste, I think everyone can realize the meaning behind it, even if they aren't particularly fond of the taste themselves.
:) look forward to more of your works
Monkee63I agree with everyone else who said this, this is great because its simple.
The poem sould be long and it is boring. It need a wow in it.
In case you were unclear.
While this is a poem, it is also a haiku.
Haiku are most commonly said to have 17 syllables. In traditional Japanese haiku however, it is 17 moras. I quote, a mora is “Something of which a long syllable consists of two and a short syllable consists of one.”
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i dont like that sunshine12 put such harsh feedback. ive gotten lots of that before and it only makes you stop writing for weeks it took me a long time to start writing again; even longer to share with others, i was afraid others would read it and scoff like the other haters out there; if you dont like it; keep your mouth closed because other people do.
but yet we exist as two
no matter how much we disagree
we have to coexist you see
beach love this haiku too! It is perfect, and sweet, and i agree, it is beautiful because it is simple!
I looove this haiku! Haiku's are my favorite form of poetry...this is beautiful because it's simple.
PaRaNoRmAl627i saw this on the homepage and i clicked on it to see the rest......then i realized there was no rest :)
adorable<3
It is so simple yet pretty! I really like how thought-provoking it was...great job! <33 please check out my work?! Ahh thankssss :)
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