Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Sunday Morning
bpjrobertI like this poem its nice an simple. It also delivers a strong message. Good poem.
I didn't really like that the Haiku only had one comparison. In my opinion, well written Haikus should give out several message. I liked the idea of waking up on a Sunday morning and having coffee with your Sweetheart, it gave off a warm tone.
Harebelle
I really, really love this. It's so natural in the Haiku form, it reads like you had a story and told it, not like you had a story and then crammed it into set numbers of syllables. Great job!
Lola_Black
That's so sweet! I must say, I've read tons of haikus but I've never enjoyed any more than I have this. Keep writing! (By the way, if anybody wants to read any of my poems, please do!)
If you tried to write a eighteen-stanza poem with as much meaning as this haiku has, you would fail. I love it completely!
TotheSeaWhoops, that was supposed to be a new comment, not a reply. Sorry!
Norma-BernardI have tried haiku a million times and it's never been this good. Did you write this before your coffee or after???? lol jk. Either way, I love it. Check out my work please and see what you think. :)
This makes me feel warm and happy and satisfied. It shares a striking resemblance with good coffee. (:
Aww, I LOVE this! Its so cute, cozy and sweet :) I Love how it captures everything in just a couple of lines. I really love this so much. So refreshing!
nai.n.n. said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 11:38 pm:
Jul. 24, 2011 at 11:38 pm:
love it... but it's really short. it's cute and sweet, but it has to be more powerful if it's only going to be that short...
TaleGateAs an author, I feel like it's good as it is. Doesn't need to be longer. I personally love coffee on a Sunday morning. It's refreshing. If it went on too much longer, it'd just drag on. It's meant to be short I think.
ohheyyyelliSweet thanks. I hope I didn't come off as too snobbish O.o
HollyBellA short straight to the point poem like a breathe of fresh air. Great job.
Check out mine? - I'm desperate for comments :3 http://www.teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/350551/Kings-Cross/
writerfreak21231WOW!! great poem! so simple and nice! Great job! I just wrote two books called nightstalker and the beast. please check them out and read them, and make sure u post comments! Thanks! :D
short and sweet! it's amazing how so few words can say so much- something so significant. especially for people who like coffee! and sorry to advertise here, but i just submitted my first stuff-please give me feed-back
redhairCatCould you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!
Exuse me! but did you know this poem, word for word, was writtin two years ago and placed elsewear online by someone of the name, Samantha B. That was longer ago than you have been a member. Did you place that one as well, or is this a word for word plagerism? I would aprecait an honest answer.
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