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Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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GoGoGryffindor said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 2:31 pm:
This is a wonderful haiku. Good job!!
 
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soldout said...
Sept. 29, 2011 at 6:33 pm:
Very, very short. But hey, simple is the star.
 
JesusLover replied...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 4:17 pm :
You right, but its very good! Even if its short its still good!!!
 
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StarGazer453 said...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 8:32 pm:
Simple but right to the point!  I enjoyed the message of being with your sweetheart and loving every moment.  :)
 
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S. said...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 7:57 pm:

I really like how short it is. simplicity is a rarity these days ;)

 

 
Haiku replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 8:10 pm :
That's because it's a haiku...
 
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tianna123 said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 1:35 pm:
aww, ths is cuute !
 
bodyrock replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 3:07 pm :
awsome story mann
 
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jasont727 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 3:52 pm:
Lovely. Simple yet gets the message across very elegantly.
 
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jaque1995 said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 8:53 am:
aww!!!! this is cute :D
 
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bpjrobert said...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 4:31 pm:
I liked it a lot.
 
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Kirsten L. said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 3:18 pm:
Aww! This was so sweet! :D
 
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weasel123 said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 10:31 am:
I like this poem its nice an simple. It also delivers a strong message. Good poem.
 
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tooswaggedout said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:29 pm:

I didn't really like that the Haiku only had one comparison. In my opinion, well written Haikus should give out several message. I liked the idea of waking up on a Sunday morning and having coffee with your Sweetheart, it gave off a warm tone. 

 

 
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Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 10:51 am:
I really, really love this. It's so natural in the Haiku form, it reads like you had a story and told it, not like you had a story and then crammed it into set numbers of syllables. Great job!
 
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Lola_Black said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 8:40 pm:
That's so sweet! I must say, I've read tons of haikus but I've never enjoyed any more than I have this. Keep writing! (By the way, if anybody wants to read any of my poems, please do!)
 
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xxEbonyxx said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 7:51 pm:
If you tried to write a eighteen-stanza poem with as much meaning as this haiku has, you would fail. I love it completely!
 
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TotheSea said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 5:18 pm:
Whoops, that was supposed to be a new comment, not a reply. Sorry!
 
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Norma-Bernard said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 4:24 pm:
I have tried haiku a million times and it's never been this good. Did you write this before your coffee or after???? lol jk. Either way, I love it. Check out my work please and see what you think. :)
 
TotheSea replied...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 5:18 pm :
This makes me feel warm and happy and satisfied.  It shares a striking resemblance with good coffee. (:
 
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