Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Sunday Morning
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editorbunnies said...
Apr. 24 at 3:17 pm:
Apr. 24 at 3:17 pm:
We like coffee too, but perhaps it's not very zen-like... (haiku is traditionally influenced by Zen Buddhism)
adamerone
writer3499
NNNEEEOOO11
BeckSunflowernot to be mean but that is a metaphor,but yes, awesome all the same
ARandomKidHas said...
Jan. 30 at 7:15 am:
Jan. 30 at 7:15 am:
decent writing. Bad tempo
alessa
Villangel
Tremendous
arcanine24
Ahmad-MobeenThis is really cute... and touching! =)
I love it... seriously! Good job Done! =)(=
*beautiful*spirit*Sweet and refreshing as a good cup of coffee:)
GothicNightmare
PrincessBubblegum
TheWhiteFlowersmall poem yet so big in definition
GOOD JOB!!!!
sunriseusnseti like how one verse flows into the next! great job(:
happybunny
MiaCaroline
emilybwriteswow big impact for 15 syllables....please ccheck out my poem "Forgotten Domain" and comment/rate it thanks:)
poetrylyricsGreat Job. Straight to the fact. Check out my first poem. I love critiques. : )
MeaghanSeesStars
It's a haiku of course its gonna be short
So simply you said what others have trouble relaying by the end of an entire novel. Congratulations on making an emotion that sparks something in others.
Shahaad_TheCreatorSo warming, and unique! GREAT WORK!
soldoutVery, very short. But hey, simple is the star.
JesusLoverYou right, but its very good! Even if its short its still good!!!
StarGazer453Simple but right to the point! I enjoyed the message of being with your sweetheart and loving every moment. :)
S. said...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 7:57 pm:
Sept. 28, 2011 at 7:57 pm:
I really like how short it is. simplicity is a rarity these days ;)
tianna123 said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 1:35 pm:
Sept. 26, 2011 at 1:35 pm:
aww, ths is cuute !
jasont727Lovely. Simple yet gets the message across very elegantly.
I like this poem its nice an simple. It also delivers a strong message. Good poem.
I didn't really like that the Haiku only had one comparison. In my opinion, well written Haikus should give out several message. I liked the idea of waking up on a Sunday morning and having coffee with your Sweetheart, it gave off a warm tone.
HarebelleI really, really love this. It's so natural in the Haiku form, it reads like you had a story and told it, not like you had a story and then crammed it into set numbers of syllables. Great job!
Lola_BlackThat's so sweet! I must say, I've read tons of haikus but I've never enjoyed any more than I have this. Keep writing! (By the way, if anybody wants to read any of my poems, please do!)
If you tried to write a eighteen-stanza poem with as much meaning as this haiku has, you would fail. I love it completely!
TotheSeaWhoops, that was supposed to be a new comment, not a reply. Sorry!
Norma-BernardI have tried haiku a million times and it's never been this good. Did you write this before your coffee or after???? lol jk. Either way, I love it. Check out my work please and see what you think. :)
This makes me feel warm and happy and satisfied. It shares a striking resemblance with good coffee. (:
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