Sunday Morning MAG

December 29, 2008
By sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We have to be continually jumping off cliffs and developing our wings on the way down." Kurt Vonnegut


Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.



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iiris SILVER said...
on Feb. 28 2017 at 2:18 am
iiris SILVER, Tirane, Other
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I really liked this haiku. Good job!

rubyraeg said...
on Apr. 27 2016 at 10:19 pm
rubyraeg, Columbus, New Jersey
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For anyone, it can be /anyone/. This makes me appreciate my loved ones.

on Apr. 15 2016 at 11:25 pm
ambivalent GOLD, West Bend, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. the worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. [sylvia plath]

everyone who reads this haiku pictures someone else in their mind, and i think that is beautiful. thank you xoxo

on Nov. 4 2015 at 1:16 pm
itss.hallee BRONZE, Addis, Louisiana
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
Sunday Morning “Sunday mornings with You, my dear, are a thousand Cups of good coffee” . I am in love with coffee. I had 2 cups every morning. The person who I enjoy drinking coffee with the most is my mother. Thanks for writing this.

on Nov. 4 2015 at 1:13 pm
percykilo BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments
I like this because you blending morning in with coffee. I like this line the most,"are a thousand Cups of good coffee" because i like coffee.

NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2015 at 7:39 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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Hi this has a really solid beginning, but the analogy could be tweaked! I love it though! Give me feedback on my poem please!

on Nov. 17 2014 at 11:12 am
Freshatilly BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments
I agree with you 100% #DunkinDonuts

on Jul. 20 2014 at 7:39 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

I think it does deserve the praise it's getting. Depth is not all that matters. It is simple, and clearly appeals to many. 

on May. 29 2014 at 7:12 pm
raysofsunshine GOLD, Lakebay, Washington
17 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not about the happy ending, it's about the story."

I love this!  

on May. 12 2014 at 1:50 pm
Student-of-a-Jedi BRONZE, Kenai, Alaska
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Usually poetry is a mixed feeling of mine. Some poems, sonnets, haikus, etc. make sense to me while others make no sense at all! For this Haiku, it makes sense for me!  You can't help but smile from this Haiku and visulize a couple in love! In such a short amount of lines and words you see a story unfold. Because of this I would most defiantly rate this a 5 out of 5!  Great Hauki! One question! Is that coffee perhaps Starbucks? (: 

on Mar. 31 2014 at 2:03 pm
NaomiHallS PLATINUM, Ventura, California
26 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If they cut off both hands, I will compose music anyway holding the pen in my teeth." -Shostakovich

So sweet and genius!

Funne GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2014 at 6:33 pm
Funne GOLD, Cleveland, Ohio
19 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I never ask a man what his business is, for it never interests me. What I ask him about are his thoughts and dreams."

-H.P Lovecraft

Seems a little overrated.

on Sep. 20 2013 at 2:48 am
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Are you serious? Is this REALLY worth this many comments? To be fair, it's a good haiku, but.....really? This has more meaning and impact and memorability behind it than other poems? Whaaaaaaaaat? I respect all of your opinions on this, but REALLY think about it; is this poem really deserving of this much praise?

PixiePoet GOLD said...
on Sep. 16 2013 at 6:39 pm
PixiePoet GOLD, Woodbine, Maryland
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We must not lose this sense of possibility because in the end, it's all we have." - Marina Keegan

Aww, this is so sweet! 

on Aug. 22 2013 at 8:04 am
ViraDash BRONZE, Sungai Petani, Other
1 article 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, evil drives a minivan.

I like it but I don't love it.

on Aug. 7 2013 at 6:02 pm
WatercolorWriter SILVER, Sykesville, Maryland
7 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world." --Unknown

"Be the change you want to see in the World." --Mahatma Gandhi

This is one of my favorite haikus!! I love it. :)

KylieV SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2013 at 10:30 pm
KylieV SILVER, Goose Creek, South Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 10 comments
I truly love this piece.The hyperbole of being with this person on Sunday mornings "are a thousand Cups off good coffee" has simply stated that this person means a lot to the person in the poem. Wonderful poem!

Mandy22 GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2013 at 9:52 am
Mandy22 GOLD, Apollo, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"True love will triumph in the end - which may or may not be a lie, but if it is a lie, then it's the most beautiful lie we have."

This is a simply beautiful poem! Great job!

Rosie13 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2013 at 2:27 pm
Rosie13 BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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I love the metaphor you used..."a thousand cups of good coffee"...!

KrisNoe GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2013 at 1:29 pm
KrisNoe GOLD, Mayfield, Kentucky
16 articles 7 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't pay no mind to the demons. They fill you with fear.
- Phillip Phillips

i agree it is good but...




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