Sunday Morning This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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weasel123 said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 10:31 am
I like this poem its nice an simple. It also delivers a strong message. Good poem.
tooswaggedout said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:29 pm

I didn't really like that the Haiku only had one comparison. In my opinion, well written Haikus should give out several message. I liked the idea of waking up on a Sunday morning and having coffee with your Sweetheart, it gave off a warm tone. 


Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 10:51 am
I really, really love this. It's so natural in the Haiku form, it reads like you had a story and told it, not like you had a story and then crammed it into set numbers of syllables. Great job!
Lola_Black said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 8:40 pm
That's so sweet! I must say, I've read tons of haikus but I've never enjoyed any more than I have this. Keep writing! (By the way, if anybody wants to read any of my poems, please do!)
xxEbonyxx said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 7:51 pm
If you tried to write a eighteen-stanza poem with as much meaning as this haiku has, you would fail. I love it completely!
TotheSea said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 5:18 pm
Whoops, that was supposed to be a new comment, not a reply. Sorry!
Norma-Bernard said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 4:24 pm
I have tried haiku a million times and it's never been this good. Did you write this before your coffee or after???? lol jk. Either way, I love it. Check out my work please and see what you think. :)
TotheSea replied...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 5:18 pm
This makes me feel warm and happy and satisfied.  It shares a striking resemblance with good coffee. (:
Janeyy said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 1:49 pm
Aww, I LOVE this! Its so cute, cozy and sweet :) I Love how it captures everything in just a couple of lines. I really love this so much. So refreshing!
nai.n.n. said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 11:38 pm
love it... but it's really short. it's cute and sweet, but it has to be more powerful if it's only going to be that short...
TaleGate replied...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 1:25 pm
As an author, I feel like it's good as it is. Doesn't need to be longer. I personally love coffee on a Sunday morning. It's refreshing. If it went on too much longer, it'd just drag on. It's meant to be short I think.
ohheyyyelli replied...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 9:41 pm
TaleGate^ completely agree
TaleGate replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 8:56 pm
Sweet thanks. I hope I didn't come off as too snobbish O.o
HollyBell said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 8:52 am

A short straight to the point poem like a breathe of fresh air. Great job.

Check out mine? - I'm desperate for comments :3

writerfreak21231 said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 10:40 am
WOW!! great poem! so simple and nice! Great job! I just wrote two books called nightstalker and the beast. please check them out and read them, and make sure u post comments! Thanks! :D
Issie said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 8:26 am
short and sweet! it's amazing how so few words can say so much- something so significant. especially for people who like coffee! and sorry to advertise here, but i just submitted my first stuff-please give me feed-back
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 3:13 pm
Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!
SMWells said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 8:57 am
Exuse me! but did you know this poem, word for word, was writtin two years ago and placed elsewear online by someone of the name, Samantha B. That was longer ago than you have been a member. Did you place that one as well, or is this a word for word plagerism? I would aprecait an honest answer. 
TheEternalDBSK replied...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 12:59 pm
You know, SMWells, something you might appreciate noticing, is this person's username: 'sammyso3'; before you are so quick to judge, did it even dawn upon you that they are possibly one and the same person?
S M Wells replied...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 1:49 pm
Oviously it did, or I wouldn't have asked.  But I somehow doubt it, as the person gave there age as 21.
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