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Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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StrugglingPoet said...
Oct. 14, 2011 at 4:46 pm
So simply you said what others have trouble relaying by the end of an entire novel. Congratulations on making an emotion that sparks something in others.
 
Shahaad_TheCreator said...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 8:53 pm
So warming, and unique! GREAT WORK!
 
GoGoGryffindor said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 2:31 pm
This is a wonderful haiku. Good job!!
 
soldout said...
Sept. 29, 2011 at 6:33 pm
Very, very short. But hey, simple is the star.
 
JesusLover replied...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 4:17 pm
You right, but its very good! Even if its short its still good!!!
 
StarGazer453 said...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 8:32 pm
Simple but right to the point!  I enjoyed the message of being with your sweetheart and loving every moment.  :)
 
S. said...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 7:57 pm

I really like how short it is. simplicity is a rarity these days ;)

 

 
Haiku replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 8:10 pm
That's because it's a haiku...
 
tianna123 said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 1:35 pm
aww, ths is cuute !
 
bodyrock replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 3:07 pm
awsome story mann
 
jasont727 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 3:52 pm
Lovely. Simple yet gets the message across very elegantly.
 
jaque1995 said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 8:53 am
aww!!!! this is cute :D
 
bpjrobert said...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 4:31 pm
I liked it a lot.
 
Kirsten L. said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 3:18 pm
Aww! This was so sweet! :D
 
weasel123 said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 10:31 am
I like this poem its nice an simple. It also delivers a strong message. Good poem.
 
tooswaggedout said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:29 pm

I didn't really like that the Haiku only had one comparison. In my opinion, well written Haikus should give out several message. I liked the idea of waking up on a Sunday morning and having coffee with your Sweetheart, it gave off a warm tone. 

 

 
Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 10:51 am
I really, really love this. It's so natural in the Haiku form, it reads like you had a story and told it, not like you had a story and then crammed it into set numbers of syllables. Great job!
 
Lola_Black said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 8:40 pm
That's so sweet! I must say, I've read tons of haikus but I've never enjoyed any more than I have this. Keep writing! (By the way, if anybody wants to read any of my poems, please do!)
 
xxEbonyxx said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 7:51 pm
If you tried to write a eighteen-stanza poem with as much meaning as this haiku has, you would fail. I love it completely!
 
TotheSea said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 5:18 pm
Whoops, that was supposed to be a new comment, not a reply. Sorry!
 
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