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April 17, 2014
By SabrinaMarie BRONZE, Faribault, Minnesota
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SabrinaMarie BRONZE, Faribault, Minnesota
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'"We should all start to live before we get too old. Fear is stupid, so are regrets." ~ Marilyn Monroe

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i really love cheese
it makes me really happy
cheese makes my life great

© Valcy E., Stony Point, NY

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OakwoodCat GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2014 at 1:04 pm
OakwoodCat GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
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Good poem, but maybe try adding some stronger verbs or more descriptive adjectives to make your writing more interesting. :) Keep Writing!