Broken

March 7, 2014
Silent cries at dawn
memories that were shattered
A Broken friendship.





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nelehjr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 15, 2014 at 1:26 pm
So short (as hiakus tend to be) but yet I can feel it. Recently cut ties with my best freind. Thank you for writing this.
 
Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 13, 2014 at 4:17 pm
Beautiful poem! and to an extent, relatable! Great job!
 
411Ellie_ This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 12, 2014 at 9:44 pm
Beautiful! The first line is especially striking.
 
ISeeTheStars said...
Mar. 10, 2014 at 5:33 pm
I can really relate. I'm sorry. Beautiful, though
 
Harri said...
Mar. 10, 2014 at 4:04 pm
Very well done! 
 
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