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Broken

Silent cries at dawn
memories that were shattered
A Broken friendship.



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nelehjrThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 15 at 1:26 pm:
So short (as hiakus tend to be) but yet I can feel it. Recently cut ties with my best freind. Thank you for writing this.
 
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Janelle7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 13 at 4:17 pm:
Beautiful poem! and to an extent, relatable! Great job!
 
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411Ellie_ This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 12 at 9:44 pm:
Beautiful! The first line is especially striking.
 
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ISeeTheStarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 10 at 5:33 pm:
I can really relate. I'm sorry. Beautiful, though
 
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Harri said...
Mar. 10 at 4:04 pm:
Very well done! 
 
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