juices of July MAG

February 16, 2014
By DancingShadows GOLD, Pasadena, California
DancingShadows GOLD, Pasadena, California
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Serenity is not freedom from the storm, but peace withing the storm."
~Anonymous


honey-sweet, dripping
down the valley of my chin
summer nectarine


The author's comments:

I love nectarines! And summertime :D <3 Have a beautiful day!


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on Apr. 12 2015 at 7:19 pm
DancingShadows GOLD, Pasadena, California
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Serenity is not freedom from the storm, but peace withing the storm."
~Anonymous

Thank you all so much! :) I really appreciate your support and feedback. Stay awesome! @JRaye @Beila @Amai-kun @Ray--yo @Iamwhoiam16

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 3 2015 at 8:27 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 527 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

Ahhhh you made my mouth water :):):) Lovely haiku!

Beila BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2015 at 7:51 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
3 articles 0 photos 519 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

"Valley of my chin"- Gorgeous imagery in so few words. Now I'm craving summer... and a nectarine. ;)

on Apr. 3 2015 at 1:39 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

No wonder this got into the magazine- it's well written, brings vivid images to the reader's mind, and is (dare I say it?) very sweet. Good job, DancingShadows.

on Apr. 3 2015 at 6:01 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

Added it to my favourites. Thank you!

on Apr. 3 2015 at 2:53 am
Iamwhoiam17 GOLD, Lake City Fl, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just be yourself,if you are happy that's all that matter's.

I love this poem. Beautifully written! It is amazing! :) Please take and rate my poetry,I will appreciate it.

on Jun. 12 2014 at 3:51 pm
DancingShadows GOLD, Pasadena, California
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Serenity is not freedom from the storm, but peace withing the storm."
~Anonymous

Thank you so much! :)

on May. 27 2014 at 7:31 am
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

I love this haiku! I also happen to love nectarines, and you've described what eating them is like perfectly. Congrats on getting Editor's Choice!


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