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Snowflake

November 14, 2013
By Mushroom SILVER, Skagway, Alaska
Mushroom SILVER, Skagway, Alaska
7 articles 1 photo 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If everyone is thinking alike, someone isn't thinking."
- General George Patton Jr

"If God is for us, who can be against us?"
-Romans 8:31


The snowflake descends,
As cold and winter come near,
A crystal of frost.


The author's comments:
A haiku for the following season.

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on Jan. 4 2014 at 11:22 am
Mushroom SILVER, Skagway, Alaska
7 articles 1 photo 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If everyone is thinking alike, someone isn't thinking."
- General George Patton Jr

"If God is for us, who can be against us?"
-Romans 8:31

Thank You!

on Jan. 3 2014 at 11:27 pm
ImAKeeper SILVER, Missouri City, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am the master of my fate. I am the captain of my soul."- William Ernest Henley

I'm not really a poetry person buI I really liked this. I think this is a great haiku and describes winter perfectly. It leaves the reader up to their own imagination as to what metaphors they would like to compare the haiku too. Overall, I thought it was good. No criticism here. Good work! (: