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Nightingale

Morning songs you bring,
full of happiness and peace;
light the early dawn.




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Luv4EverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 4:55 pm:
simple can be elegant but i feel that your piece lies on the too simple side
 
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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6 at 6:11 pm:
Simple yet elegant. I love it! I also like how the last line is a bit less literal. Good job :)
 
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mynameisnothabib said...
Nov. 4, 2013 at 9:57 am:
I think its good(:
 
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ChrisTid7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 31, 2013 at 9:35 pm:
I love that you were able to pack so much into such a little poem. Great job!!!
 
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Zarek said...
Oct. 30, 2013 at 12:29 pm:
love see how it describes the nightingale 
 
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