Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Forbidden Change Forbidden Change By Ms.Resilience, Somewhere, CA More by this author silences the words uttered underneath my voice. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 5 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Melissa said... Mar. 4 at 10:19 am: Good haiku. Jade.I.Am replied... today at 6:14 pm : Okay, just a few critiques. "Silences" should be "silence", because "words" is plural. And since it's a haiku, I would advise not to use the same word twice ("words"). But that's just my opinion :) I really liked the part that goes "uttered/underneath my voice". Nice imagery there, and it's thought-provoking :) Nice job, you're a very talented writer. And your haikus are really pretty :) Jade.I.Am replied... today at 6:15 pm : Sorry, that wasn't supposed to be a reply :P Report abuse dina8 said... Nov. 18, 2013 at 6:34 pm: Love this, short and simple but gets the message out! I can definetly relate Report abuse mynameisnothabib said... Nov. 4, 2013 at 9:59 am: I really love this one and how you are able to say so much with so little. I feel like, reading into that poem, that I can relate to you, because I keep so many words in, and the ones on the inside drown out the ones on the outside, because the inner ones are the real me.