Rainfall MAG

October 9, 2013
By SammieRM PLATINUM, Urbana, Missouri
SammieRM PLATINUM, Urbana, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream." -Edgar Allan Poe


Rain pitter-patters
against paint-chipped windows, like
toddlers' feet on tile.



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on Jun. 6 2014 at 11:23 am
SammieRM PLATINUM, Urbana, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream." -Edgar Allan Poe

I love the rain and my baby brother does too. Whenever he sees it raining, he runs around the kitchen with so much happiness, it makes me happy too. 

kusbeck54 said...
on Mar. 14 2014 at 1:49 pm
kusbeck54, Lake Aril, Pennsylvania
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pain is wekness leaveing the boady ray lewis

how did this come to your mind it is so beauitful

Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 16 2013 at 2:36 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

The simplicity of this poem reminds me of Sandburg's "Fog" and "Splinter". Just delictate and precise with its imagery. Congrats on the Editors' Choice. 


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