Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Rainfall Rainfall By PassionCrime, Springfield, MO More by this author against paint chipped windows, like toddlers feet on tile. « Previous article More by this author Next article » October & November Join the Discussion This article has 1 comment. Post your own! Report abuse Mckay said... today at 2:36 pm: The simplicity of this poem reminds me of Sandburg's "Fog" and "Splinter". Just delictate and precise with its imagery. Congrats on the Editors' Choice.