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the past collapses
and creates a cold creature
bright, bitter and old





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Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 30, 2013 at 4:57 pm
When you let remorse and bitterness, along with the unwillingness to forgive old accidents or fights and etc, you do become a bitter person. And you build walls that retain you from proceeding with the future. Excellent poem with, as Chris said, a "heartfelt" message. It definitely makes the reader meditate about his/her life and whether or not they have those stored emotions within them. 
 
ChrisJ This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 30, 2013 at 1:36 pm
Stunning imagery and a true heartfelt message. Great job with this piece.
 
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