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August 1, 2013
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Fires burn the sky
Trees crumpling all around
World tumbling down

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elycavill This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2013 at 11:34 am
This is actually one of rare haiku poems I liked! Good job.
maelstrom14 replied...
Sept. 1, 2013 at 7:24 pm
Thank you not many people like it :)
AcidRoses said...
Aug. 10, 2013 at 1:31 am
This reminds me of like a twisted kid's picture idk why lol. I agree with Soul, dark but I do like it. Great job :3
maelstrom14 replied...
Aug. 28, 2013 at 1:34 am
Thank you this was one of the first I wrote :)
SoulPoetry said...
Aug. 8, 2013 at 5:23 pm
Dark but i really like this haiku C:
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