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Sadness

The ache starts within,
Only boiling when prodded
By triggering words.



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DawnieRaeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:48 pm:
I like this poem. It is simple and beautiful! Simply amazing job Krasota! 
 
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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3 at 7:40 pm:
I really like this. It describes how it feels to try and bury sadness, but no matter how hard we try, the slightest things (words) can dig them up again. Wow. This is a simpler piece you've done, but I think it's all the more beautiful because of that. Great job! :)
 
Krasota-Butterflies-and-AngelsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 4 at 1:40 pm :
Thank you! :D This wasn't really one of my favourites to write, but I'm glad you liked it!
 
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