Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Breaking the Rules Breaking the Rules By Ms.Resilience, Somewhere, CA More by this author but not always obeying the rules that come in . « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 3 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Luv4Ever said... today at 4:57 pm: simple yet conveys alot in the limited form of haiku^^ Report abuse tori-gurl said... Aug. 14, 2013 at 6:38 pm: I think it is awesome that you write Haikus, this is something I don't have much experience in but I will try to give some feedback :D I think that you should add some more haikus so that you can further develop your overall ideas. Right nor I feel like the poem is underdeveloped (I am used to writing free-verse poems though) The idea of your poem is one worth pursuing though. I feel like the experience needs to be further illustrated. "But not always obeying the rules that come in"... (more ») Report abuse vegangirl0725 said... Aug. 1, 2013 at 3:53 pm: I love your Haiku, my only suggestion is to add more haikus in this poem.