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Like the orange fruit,
The ripe sun squeezes its juice
In the sky and sea.



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Superhero_Fan said...
Jul. 30, 2013 at 2:29 pm:
Wow! I never would've thought to use a metaphor about oranges to describe a sunset! Good job, this was very creative! Keep writing.
 
writefearless replied...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 12:48 pm :
thank you so much :) it means a lot :)
 
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Joyfulpeace said...
Jul. 29, 2013 at 12:44 am:
This is beautiful, and descriptive in very few words! good job! ~please check out some of my work :) 
 
writefearless replied...
Jul. 29, 2013 at 12:49 pm :
thank you so much :) i did check out your poems :) you know how to capture emotions :)
 
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