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Sunset

July 26, 2013
By writefearless SILVER, Manila, Other
writefearless SILVER, Manila, Other
8 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
scare your fear before it scares you.


Like the orange fruit,
The ripe sun squeezes its juice
In the sky and sea.



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on Jul. 31 2013 at 12:48 pm
writefearless SILVER, Manila, Other
8 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
scare your fear before it scares you.

thank you so much :) it means a lot :)

on Jul. 30 2013 at 2:29 pm
Superhero_Fan SILVER, Tomorrowland, California
7 articles 1 photo 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Impossible; for How many people did you know who refracted your own light to you?” - Fahrenheit 451

Wow! I never would've thought to use a metaphor about oranges to describe a sunset! Good job, this was very creative! Keep writing.

on Jul. 29 2013 at 12:49 pm
writefearless SILVER, Manila, Other
8 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
scare your fear before it scares you.

thank you so much :) i did check out your poems :) you know how to capture emotions :)

on Jul. 29 2013 at 12:44 am
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey

This is beautiful, and descriptive in very few words! good job! ~please check out some of my work :)