I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Moving On
pnkninja11I like every part of this poem. It is very meaningful and I can relate.
jaygonzyes, but in the second line, she can just delete the "that" and just leave it as : "out all the poems i wrote", it just flows better, don't you think ?
paty said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:37 am:
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:37 am:
was amazing because that was short but significate so much in the life of each other
Erinnn
Egyptiangirl13
the_real_reggie_rocketAaaaaaaaaaa-men :)
I can definately relate.
BrittDawn
Sometimes a few words can say a million things
very true... even though it was only like 9 words... it hit me. hard.. looovvve it. 5 stars
PenguinFeet"I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today"
--except this poem. Oh, irony!
But very nice.
I'm gonna take a guess and say they were about a boy.
It's nice - kind of funny, too - but I think it's left to a lot of loose interpretation.
inspir3dThis is why people write haikus! It's as effective as a punch to the gut; short, but leaves an unforgettable impact. GREAT WORK! very thought provoking and deep. Check out my haiku Desperate? thanks :)
Kaylarebekah131719Amazing how much power such a short sentiment can have; truly inspirational.
melone96its funny how many people post comments about how short haikus are...umm, duh..they r haikus - only 17 sylables..that's short...
bound4life4ever
hey... i wrote a poem. b ut the 1st stanza kinda stole this peom. i wanted 2 put it up on teenink but i wanted 2 ask u if its ok if i can use ur poem in my poem. thanx
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