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I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 12:01 am
Great job! 
 
incognito411 said...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 3:52 pm
Out/all/the/pomes/that/I/wrote its not 2 syllables, its just that ur all saying it wrong.
 
AnthonyDavidHall said...
Oct. 13, 2012 at 1:35 pm
"Poem" is 2 syllables. Your count is off.
 
KestrelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 3, 2013 at 4:27 pm
Sometimes, yes, but in the "olden days" it was pronounced 'pome' as it is here, making the count correct. :) 
 
The_Quiet_Girl said...
Oct. 12, 2012 at 7:18 pm
I absolutely LOVE this poem; I keep re-reading it. 
 
Dreamgirl95 said...
Jun. 14, 2012 at 2:12 pm
This is amazing. It's so short but soo powerful! Great work!
 
girly21 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 9:19 pm
Hehe I love this :) do little words but so much meaning! Check out my stuff too?
 
Ashleyy-Nichole said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 1:28 pm
I love this<3
 
Lookaflower This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 9:04 am
I can totally relate. Lovely work! You conveyed such a powerful image with so few words.
 
Parishrut said...
Mar. 31, 2012 at 11:56 am
Good poem (pronounced 'pome')!
 
Bliss124 said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 11:02 pm
this is super good; I absoluteley LOVE it
 
aphids77 said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 6:09 pm
IRONY. Very fine. Very brief. Very effective.
 
ElleNicole said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 9:37 am
I like it. =) Mind checking out my work? Thanks!
 
CoolBreeze This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 2:51 am
I like it but you have to many syllables in the 2nd line a haiku is 5 7 5 not 5 8 5 but its still pretty well written.
 
SpringMoon98 said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 5:22 pm
How is there eight in the second line?
 
Tremendous replied...
Dec. 24, 2011 at 10:18 pm
out/all/the/po/ems/that/I/wrote. Looks like eight to me.
 
ManekiNeko said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 8:50 am
You have 8 syllables in the second line.
 
shizuka said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 4:33 pm
and the picture really matches the poem :D really love them both
 
Kimberly B. replied...
Mar. 21, 2013 at 8:51 am
very good!!!! :)))
 
mattuglyface said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 9:29 am
shlong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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