I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today
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Moving On
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girly21
Hehe I love this :) do little words but so much meaning! Check out my stuff too?
Ashleyy-Nichole
LookaflowerI can totally relate. Lovely work! You conveyed such a powerful image with so few words.
Parishrut
Bliss124
aphids77
ElleNicoleI like it. =) Mind checking out my work? Thanks!
CoolBreeze
I like it but you have to many syllables in the 2nd line a haiku is 5 7 5 not 5 8 5 but its still pretty well written.
How is there eight in the second line?
Tremendousout/all/the/po/ems/that/I/wrote. Looks like eight to me.
ManekiNekoand the picture really matches the poem :D really love them both
mattuglyface said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 9:29 am:
Nov. 21, 2011 at 9:29 am:
shlong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BieberLover16
midnight_howl said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 12:52 pm:
Oct. 26, 2011 at 12:52 pm:
!.........That was short......!
sunriseusnset
Beautifulmonsta
I like this poem because almost ever one in this world has had a hardship and how they need to move on. Good poem.
IamtheshyStargirlStrong, independent, emotional. You, my dear, know how to write an haiku, even though it doesn't have any nature in it ;)
Milly.Hester
dark_armor1just remove that. but overall i love it! very independent and inpowering. good job!
HannahMarie17I need to do what this author did. I completely liove and feel this piece. Keep writing!
A.M.Wilson
writerfreak21231Great job! I just wrote two books called nightstalker and the beast. please check them out and read them, and make sure u post comments! Thanks! :D (sorry for advertizing!)
NEVER_PerfectI love this.. & I remember a day i did the same. Those 3 words show a new beginninq to a different part of life. Great Job :)
redhairCatCould you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!
freeflow23
lmd_4994so deep! i enjoy this poem
Tree18I love this! I usually cant get into haikus but this one I could really relate to! Great job!
luv_4_broadway
WritingJuliaI know I've commented on this b4, but every time I read it it gets better!
simple and powerful. good.
Unbalenced.Freak
KrazyButCool
timeformetofly7I loved the poem i just think people could take it different ways. like nasty break up. or a falll out with a friend
spazztasticgirly!(: said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 5:54 pm:
Jan. 20, 2011 at 5:54 pm:
wow this poem really opened my eyes im going threw a really hard break up and it just made me think that it is possible to get him out of my head... i thought it was love and he bailed on me for another girl. anyways! I LOVE YOUR POEM!
Alia_Tanbrilliant! :D :D :D good for you! please read and comment on my haikus! :)
ShahedThis is a good poem. It is exactly what I want to do. But I need to write so I can have more pages.
SeelixWow! This is amazing- what everyone wants to do, but never can=( Excellent job!
OnMyMindVery t the point and clear as day I love it !
B3_boLdoh my gosh...wow this is exactly what im trying to do.....throw out everything that reminds me of him. its just so hard to let go of my work.....its a small piece of myself. LOVED THIS!
sparksfly
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