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ah ecstasy

July 16, 2013
By Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou


you release with a
growl deep within your throat as
the virile sun groans

sharply and the curved
moon moans while i sigh with a
smile—ah ecstasy!


The author's comments:
You interpret it.

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on Mar. 11 2016 at 6:28 pm
Poetry101 BRONZE, Faith, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
You don't need anybody to tell you who you are or what you are. You are what you are !













~John Lennon

have just a idea about this poem. i think it is good but has the best meaning to it.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 6:27 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Hazel, thanks. I feared no one would like this haiku due to its nature. Some people tend to be sensitve when it comes to...ahem. XD Great interpretation. Thank you. 

HazelGrace said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 8:33 pm
Okay idk if this is the right interpretation.. but this poem is pretty freaking sexual. But its like poetic sensuality, which in my opinion is the best kind ;) Fantastic job describing it- the masculine sun and the femimine curvy moon- it all works perfectly. I wasn't aware it was possible to write a sexual haiku but you did and like props to you becuase this is amazing. Nice work :)


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